Greetings to Ailis, Roana, and Cadell!
Here are my comments on the AE 66 ILoI.
1. Bastiano di Iacopo - Lovely name! If I may pick some nits, <di> is a *preposition*, not a *literal patronymic*. (All patronymics are literal, and the patronymic is the name of the father, not the preposition connecting the father's name and the son's name, as <di> is). No conflicts found with the device.
2. Caitri/ona M'Gilledoroughe - (I'm using the / to represent the accent, since my composer is giving me grief about accents again). What was the original conflict? This redesign looks clear.
3. Cellach mac Toimi/n - The device looks clear. I wonder if <Toimi/n> is related to <Toimici/n>, <Toimilin>, which are dated to the 14th C in OCM s.n. Toma/s. It certainly looks like a diminutive of <Toma/s>. Given the 14th century date of these other diminutives, I think we can be reasonably sure that <Toimi/n> was in use at the same time.
4. Deryk Archer - Nice name. The device looks clear.
5. Gareth Craig - <Gareth> was an extremely rare name in period, and it is English, not Welsh. English/Scots combinations were ruled a weirdness on the 09/01 LoI; since this is the only problem, it is registerable, if not particularly authentic. Device looks clear.
6. Lochlainn mac Faola/in Ba/n - <Faola/n> is dated to 1203 in Mari's index of masculine names from the Irish Annals (http://www.s-gabriel.org/names/mari/AnnalsIndex/Masculine/Faelan.shtml). This spelling is appropriate for the 13th century; for the 12th century, <Fa/ela/n> is correct. No form of <Lachlan> or <Lochlan> appears to be found in the annals in the 12th or 13th century, so this makes it a poorer choice for an authentic name. Mari's article of names from OCM lists both dates and headers for each entry. <Ba/n> is dated to 794 s.n. Lerben. It is also found, in this spelling 5 times between 1328 and 1583 in Mari's index of masculine descriptives from the Irish Annals (http://www.s-gabriel.org/names/mari/AnnalsIndex/DescriptiveBynames/Ban.shtml), so this spelling is fine for whatever period he choses.
No conflicts found on his device.
7. Lorenz Butterman - His name is not in the OandA. This is clear of Katharine Devereaux, (reg. 12/01 via Atlantia), "Per saltire erminois and pean," with one CD for changing the line of division and one for changing half the tincture of the field. Since this is field primary armory, more than one CD can be gotten for changes to the field.
8. Rose Thorne - Her name was registered 11/92 via the East.
In service may I remain,
-Aryanhwy merch Catmael