Greetings, this is only just a preliminary knee jerk, but here's what I see.

 

3. Katerin - Device.  The chevron is not "raguly" it is "rayonny". 

I need to check what a propper flame looks like, but I am pretty sure it's not what is drawn, I at first blazoned them as antlers.  This either needs a reblazon or a redraw, depending feedback from the submitter.

 

4 Onora  - Name should be "Onora ingen Chonaill".  'ingen'  is 'daughter', 'Chonaill' is 'of Conall'.  "inghean ui" is more of a clan relationship.

 

Just somethings that struck me.  Feel free to tell me I'm smoking crack on the flames though, but they look like antlers to me.

 

Brandubh O'Donnghaile

Comet Pursuivant